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WANTED: CO-WRITER; SCRIPTWRITER and COVER ARTIST

remember my artwork "Green Lantern "FEMALE VERSION"? if you do, then you might be the person that I am looking for.. :))

I have written a draft of the story I made up based from that artwork, and now I'll be needing you guys to perfect it. So here we go...

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"GREEN LANTERN: THE BRIGHTEST DAY (tentative title)"

(NOTE: this story takes place in a universe were super heroes and super villains don't exist. But The Emotional Spectrum does, and its closer than ever to us. In this story, they appear as auras in the sky every night in the high places.)

-Prolouge-
The story would start with a group of family campers going to Inuvik in the North West territories, where a secret weapon experimentation is being held (The campers are going to be named The Burton Family, while the industry responsible for the weapons experimentation will be called OA INDUSTRIES). One of the Burton's, Katherine Burton(beautiful, cheerful, and adventurous) finds this secret experimentation. She saw that the weapon is mobile Circular Laser Battery which is solar based and is capable of firing solar laser beams (The basis of the weapon's design is the Battery of Sinestro in the movie Green Lantern: First Flight). To test the weapons full potential, they tested it at night. But the experiment goes wrong when it starts absorbing energy from the auroras (which by the way starts coming closer as the story progresses). The Battery starts to eliminate everything in the site and starts roaming in territories. Katherine run quick to warn her family, but she was attacked by the battery on her way. Blasted with different types of emotional spectrum, she then transforms to KRONA( she will not be referred as KRONA in this story, but that might change. The Basis of her image will be those of Krona's appearance in Green Lantern: Emerald Knights). She then walks in to her family who is actually looking for her. But they were frightened with her new image, which leads to their deaths (similar to a way how Parallax sucks the fear out of his enemies). She didn't mean to kill her family. Terrified, scared and felt alone, she cried. But she then loses control of her powers. She tries to control it, but she failed, only resulting for the power of will to separate from her. She then vanishes.

The emerald energy of will starts to seek into a village in Inuvit, where it found a tourist named Bill Ganthet (optimistic and quite curious with things, also adventurous) who makes rings and jewelries for a living. Bill was shocked with surprise as the emerald energy places it self to his lantern (reshaping itself from an old railroad lantern to a more traditional OAn Lantern). The emerald energy stretches itself to Bill's mind, ordering to place rings in front of the lantern. Bill got four. The lantern then granted Bill a note inside his head about an oath of will(The Green Lantern Oath) and he recites it, while the lantern empowers the rings. As the rings are fully powered, it all flied out to Bill's window, to seek its new wearer. Bill then decides to wait for the results...


(Note: The stories that will introduce our lanterns all happened at the same time. Krona will appear simultaneously through out the story, and still out of control of her powers. Her mannerisms are similar to those of a Witch in Left 4 Dead. )


-Abigail "Gail" Gardner-

Obnoxious, uncivilized, alcoholic, Abigail is an orphan when her parents are sent to prison. She was taught good things, but still she never somehow finds them that she even committed small crimes with her friends(her friends are also small time criminals, with most of them are muggers and thieves). She is the befriend by her new roommate Kari Limbo (sweet, sympathetic, but frightful). Kari tries to help "humanize" Gail.

One night Gail was waiting for her friends on a night club, but neither one of the showed up. She went outside to seek fresh air, there she was "found" by the ring. The ring attaches itself to Gail. Gail tries to remove it, but then she was lifted by the ring and they take off to the sky. She was landed near to a dark alley where a mugging is seemingly about to take place. She found out that the muggers are actually her friends, and their victim this time is Kari. She plead for them to stop, but they were shocked and irritated when they found out Gail sympathizes Kari and won't listen to her friends. So the team split into two, the majority of the boys about to rape Kari, the rest is beating Gail. At her beating, she uses the ring for the first time. Making a construct of a giant boxing glove, she freed herself and Kari. They then flew to escape.

With the gang left on the alley, Krona then suddenly appears and starts randomly attacking them. The gang covered with the yellow energy of fear, merged into one figure now known as LEGION (LEGION's appearance will be similar to those of its appearance in Green Lantern: Emerald Dawn. Though with a more human-like face and body, but would be nine feet tall. LEGION's abilities would include super strength, super speed and invulnerability. The armor would glow yellow lights, making it impervious to any green constructs made by the power of will). LEGION then finds Gail and Kari to execute their revenge on them. Gail couldn't harm LEGION, so they escaped. She first hide Kari in a safe place and also tells her to get some help from the authorities, then goes after LEGION.

Gail would fight Legion from the city square to a construction sight. Gail was badly harmed as Legion stays powerful. As the fight kicks off to the construction sight, Gail had an idea of covering Legion with wet cement. As Legion is covered with wet cement, Gail would then blast Legion into pieces, also returning her friends to normal. The authorities would then take Gail's former friends away. Gail and Kari would then unite. They both hugged and promised to be good and loyal to each other, as best friends.



-Mikeala "Kyle" Rayner-


The story starts out on an internship in an international magazine "Feast Magazine". Focusing on three college students; Mikeala Rayner, Alexander Dewitt and Terra Berg. The three are close friends. Despite her good looks, the three are mostly being bullied by their classmates. Mikeala would often be bullied most of the three.
Mikeala is an artist. But her works were always rejected in favor of more appealing artist. She always seems rejected. She would then be confort by her friends at their favorite stop at a diner next to her apartment, but the trio is forced to move out when they are being "stumped" by another artist and classmate, Rena Stone (a more popular girl than Kyle).

At her apartment, Mikeala would often call her mom who is working abroad. She always
feels alone when she is at her apartment. One day at their internship, her work was sabotaged by Rena, knowing that Mikeala would somehow get the approval of the editor-in-chief Andre Choi. Mikeala didn't have a chance to defend her work, which makes her drop out of the internship.

She instantly went home at her apartment. Angered and depressed, she cried. At her moment of despair, the ring found her (as she wears the ring, the power of will stretches to her mind, making her recite the Green Lantern oath. Then constructing her a costume). The ring would then take her out of the window and gave her a chance to fly, which Mikeala enjoys. At her time of enjoyment, Krona Frightened by Krona's image, Mikeala soul was almost sucked out of her, but the ring somehow reminds her of her mother who loves, which gives her the will to escape.  Krona would then accidentally open a portal, which would reveal the Solar Battery which was tested in the secret weapon's area by Oa Industries, which is now a Yellow Battery of Fear (this battery will have its same features from Green Lantern: First Flight). Krona would then disappear, and the battery starts roaming around while in invincible mode.

Mikeala would rush in to her friends and warn them about the situation, but her friends won't believe her. In order to make them believe, she made a construct of a giant coffee machine on her apartment, thus her friends were surprised. They would then rush to find where the battery is going. The battery would first commence its attack randomly; its first attack is at Mikeala's school.

Mikeala would then go clash with battery. As Mikeala is about to be exposed to the public as Green Lantern, she made a construct of a mask. Their battle would then make too many damages in the city; she then takes it to space. A little bit scared on her first time out of earth, the battery gets the upper hand on Mikeala. But she returned to her senses before she can get defeated.The fight would continue in the moon. Mikeala had finally damaged the battery severely. Before the battery recovers, she uses a giant golf club hit the battery at a blank range, and blasting the battery to pieces, with its yellow energy being hurled to deep space. On her return to earth, Mikeala would then be welcomed by the citizens thanking her for saving them. For the first time, she was praised by the masses.



-Joana "Joan" Stewart-

The story starts with Joan running away from her father's home, when her father was called on duty at the marines base. As she starts to seek out for her mother, who is long divorced with her father. She would then learn that her mother previously worked as a secretary at a mental hospital. She wasn't able to find her, seemingly the last place where she could find her. She was then comforted by her friend Roger Hardin(good looking but slight dorky).

That night, Roger dated Joan at a park near a lake to cheer her up. While was busy finding some snack to eat, Joan decides to go to what seems a wishing fountain. She shut her eyes and wished that she would have powers to find her mother and reconcile her family. As she open her eyes again, she then found out that she's been floating and then carried away by a green energy. The green energy would then take her outside of a house. It is actually a house of Joan's mother who is now married with another man, Dr. Patrick Ojo. She was saddened for what she saw and then loses faith on her wish, just as the ring appears on Joan. Joan wears the ring and the ring guides her on how to use it. She then starts to fly backed to the park to seek Roger, who is afraid waiting in the park as it is late. Joan told Roger to what happened to her.

We then cut to Joan's mother, who seems unhappy with her new husband Patrick, because he is obsessed with his work that he keeps it a secret to Joan's mother. Patrick would then go to his laboratory at an asylum, where he experiments five insane criminals whom are all psychopaths. During his experimentation, Krona appears. Dr. Ojo wasn't that all afraid of Krona, but she suddenly starts blasting color beams, resulting for Dr. Ojo to be blind, and making the five psychopaths into brute monsters known as THE MANHUNTERS (their will be five types of Manhunters; THE RAGDOLL a master contortionist and super slim, but the smartest one; THE BANGER slight more buff than The Ragdoll, has very long hair which is covered in red energy and uses it as a whip and has many blades all over its body; THE HAMMERHEAD a brute monster which body is strapped in a yellow construct of a staright jacket, and uses its head to smash and break its opponent; THE BAREFOOT also a brute as big as The Hammerhead, but with smaller arms but humongous big feet that has the ability to jump at high distance and also grants him superhuman speed; and THE LEADER who  retains its human brain unlike the others, and a brute similar to those of The Tank in Left 4 Dead).

After a long pain of torture, The Manhunters killed Dr. Ojo. They would then break out of the asylum and starts wrecking havoc in it, as it kills everyone in it. The authorities couldn't stop, and the big brawl is being broadcast, which makes Joan draw its attention to it. Joan is hesitant go after the Manhunters, believing they are stronger than her. But Roger would then encourage her to conquer her fear. She then takes off to fight the Manhunters. After a long fight, Joan would then get the upper hand of imprisoning the Manhunters on a giant construct of a money vault with just walls in it, she made it several vaults within a vaults. With all her might buries them deep to the ground of the asylum.

After the fight, Joan's mother and father would come after her, as they were called by Roger. Proud with their daughter's achievement, Joan's wish finally came true when her parents decide to reconcile and get married again.



-Hayley Jordan-

The story would start out in Coast City High School were transfery introduces herself, Hayley Jordan(beautiful and appealing yet sarcastic, arrogant, daredevil, quite boyish. Fun Fact: to perfect her character, i always think of Miley Stewart from Hanna Montana as her basis, lol.). She is then welcomed by two student, Theresa Heller (a video game addict, best known for her XBox live and PSN username "5inestr0") and Carl Ferris (son of Carol Ferris, who is a long time girlfriend of Hayley's older brother Hal Jordan. Carol Ferris is also the owner of the company Ferris Aircraft, where Hal is a test pilot). Hayley, Carl and Theresa have known each other since kindergarten. But then the Jordan's moved to Central City, they didn't really have much time to hang out.

On her welcome, she was interrupted by Helena Hammond(a natural blonde and a cheer leader. She is also Carl's ex girlfriend). Hayley and Helena had a bad start. On Hayley's first week at school, she would often clash with Helena. Only to be stopped by Carl and Theresa. The story then kicks off on their field trip at OA Industries. Hayley would get lost, until she arrives at room were a group of men discusses about a secret weapon experimentation that failed. It was Top Secret and classified. She was sought by Helena. Helena warns Hayley to tell it to everyone, Hayley begs not to. Helena gave Hayley a condition to stay away from Carl and stay away from everyone. Hayley would then leave the field trip, for her protection.

She went outside of the facility but has no means of transportation, she would then be surprisingly taken away by a green energy (this scene would somehow mirror those of the scene were Hal Jordan was taken away and sent to Abin Sur's location on the 2011 live-action film Green Lantern). During her flight, the ring attaches itself to Hayley and constructed her a costume with a mask. The energy would drop Hayley outside a bank robbery, to practice her. She then successfully stops the robbery and apprehends the robbers.  

Meanwhile back at OA Industries, Carl searches for Hayley. Helena then tries to flirt with Carl, with Theresa being blocked by Helena's co-cheer leaders. Then trip would proceed to the lab of Professor Neal Emerson to show his gallery. He coordinated to the teacher that he will conduct a science fair at their school.

The next day, Hayley tries to keep the Green Lantern persona a secret. She approaches Theresa, but tries to avoid Carl. We then jump to the science fair, were Professor Neal Emerson shows he's magnet manipulator, which he believes could cure certain illness. During the science exhibit, Krona shows up. She starts to attack randomly again, this gave Hayley a chance to be Green Lantern again. She would go out against Krona inside the gym were the science fair is being held. Krona is still out of control of her powers and starts making portals everywhere, which gave Hayley an advantage of throwing Krona on one of the portals. The portals vanishes then, and everyone was saved.

As she went home, she was ambushed by Theresa and Carl. Both were sure that Hayley is Green Lantern because they could still recognize her mannerisms and body language in spite having the mask. She would then reveal herself to them. The attack on the science fair actually triggered Professor Emerson's personality disorder. On his lab, he made an armor and then calls himself DOCTOR POLARIS(his armor would be similar to those of its appearance in Batman: The Brave and The Bold). DOCTOR POLARIS orders Krona to appear. He then starts attacking the city in hopes to attract Krona's attention, only call Green Lantern to action.

Hayley would go clash with Doctor Polaris. After a long fight, Hayley would strip Professor Emerson out of the armor. While she was secretly being praised by Theresa and Carl the next day, Helena interferes. She would have tell Hayley's secret, only to figure out that the classified incident is now on news. Hayley would then drop a punchline on Helena, claiming "its not secret anymore". Hayley then smiles and blinks at Helena, yet Helena was shocked when Hayley's eyes glowed green when she blinked.



(the introduction of the lanterns is over, now its time for them to meet one another)..



All for of them would then go to Inuvit since the ring tells them too. There Hayley and Gail would meet. The two didn't go well when they start fighting for who is the first better Lantern, they would go on and fight construct against construct. Meanwhile, Mikeala and Joana would meet and they start searching for answers. Their rings would then guide them to Bill Ganthet's house, who was waiting for them. Bill was surprised to see them and offered them to recharge their rings on his battery. The three of them would go find the remaining two lanterns. But they are interfered by Krona (who is now in control of her powers. Also, she is more angered than frightened now). Mikeala and Joana would go one fight Krona, as Bill tries to find the other two lanterns.

Bill's lantern would extend its powers to Hayley and Gail's ring, and pulls then into their location. Bill told Hayley and Gail that the others needed help to fight Krona. Hesitant to work each other, Gail and Hayley then helps Mikeala and Joan. The lanterns would continue their fight with Krona to the high west, up to the high distance were the auroras are stronger. As they go up, Hayley and Gail's ring runs out of energy, resulting for them to fall, yet they were save by the energy of will in the auroras. It also recharged their rings.

During their battle, Mikeala and Joan learned that Krona is not capable of gaining the entire energy of the emotional spectrum, the four of them would make a construct of a giant jar (shaped like a Green Lantern Battery), imprisons Krona in it and lures her into the auroras. But Krona is seemingly powerful and tries to fight back. The lanterns are slowly loosing their willpower, but then they were guided by the auroras. Bill gave them a tip to recite the oath, but before they could recite it entirely, they were  interrupted by Krona when she grew bigger and starts strangling the lanterns. The lanterns with all their might recited the oath, then the auroras grew stronger to its fullest, unleashing the full power of the green energy by pulling Krona up to the auroras. Her powers were the sucked out of her, and Katherine was returned to normal, so was her family (whose souls were kept inside her).

Katherine and her family would then thank the Lanterns for saving them. After their glorious victory, the lanterns decided to divide earth into "sectors" or their territory that they will protect. They soon earned each others respect, and would then continue to protect earth, as GREEN LANTERNS....





-The End-




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as you guys may know, the story isn't fully polished. I wish to perfect the story, but I would be needing your help guys. So if you are interested in helping me, please do message me. And what do you guys think of the story I made? comment below let me know.. again thank you.. :))
WANTED: CO-WRITER; SCRIPTWRITER and COVER ARTIST

remember my artwork "Green Lantern "FEMALE VERSION"? if you do, then you might be the person that I am looking for.. :))

I have written a draft of the story I made up based from that artwork, and now I'll be needing you guys to perfect it.

as you guys may know, the story isn't fully polished. I wish to perfect the story, but I would be needing your help guys. So if you are interested in helping me, please do message me.

And what do you guys think of the story I made? comment below let me know.. again thank you.. :))
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Interesting concepts!